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    "Can someone please tell me where I am?" I asked.
    "Your in the fortress of the fangirls." Shadow replied, "This place used to be just some normal piece of land, but then a bunch of insane fangirls took built a huge fortress on it.
    Then the guy with the bow tie added, "They've been kidnapping people they like from all over the world and bringing them here."
    "They do terrible things to us here..." Said the freaky looking kid.
    "Has anybody ever escaped?" I asked.
    "There was one guy who almost did, but then he was caught and never seen again." Shadow replied.
    "How did they do it?" I asked.
    "He was a sparkly vampire named Edward." He replied.
    "Wait, a sparkly vampire? You can't be serious." I said.
    "Are you going to let me finish the story or not kid?!" Shadow snapped.
    "Okay, okay, I'll shut up now." I replied.
    "He managed to get out of his cell somehow." Shadow continued.
    ".....Are you going to continue?"
    "No." He said
    "Why?" I asked.
    "Because that's all I know." He replied.
    "If that's all you know, then why did you bother telling me in the first place?" I was starting to get a little anoyed.
    "Because you asked!" He replied. Then there was this weird awkward silence for a moment. Then the freaky looking kid got very uncomfortably close to my face and just stared at me with his big black eyes that never seemed to close.
    "Hello there." He said.
    "Um... Hi?" I replied in a shakey voice. I Had no idea what he wanted from me.
    "Um... Can you please stop staring at me like that? It's making me very uncomfortable." I told him.
    "No, I don't want too." He replied.
    "Can you tell me why you're staring at me?" I asked.
    "You're face looks weird" He replied. I wanted to say, look who's talking, but I didn't want to, because I was afraid he would attack me if I got him angry. He didn't seem to be a very sane person.
    "Oh my, I don't believe we've properly introduced ourselves yet" The guy in the bow tie started to speak. "I am the Doctor."
    "Doctor who?" I asked.
    "Just the the Doctor." He replied. "The fellow with the mask is Erik."
    "Nice to meet you Erik" I said. Erik just glared at me, making me fell even more uncomfortable than I already was.
    "Great, now there's 2 creepy people staring at me." I thought to myself.
    "The young fellow staring at you and thinking about different ways to kill you is Jeff" The Doctor continued, "And I believe  you already know Shadow the Hedgehog."
    "Wait, This kid wants to kill me?!" I said in alarm.
    "He wants wants to kill everyone." Erik said, "Isn't that right Jeffery?"
    "Yep!" Jeff replied in a cheery voice.
    "And what's your name?" The Doctor asked.
    "Um, my name is Link." I replied in a very nervous voice.
    "Nice to meet you Link." He said back. Then I heard voices down the hall.
    "Like, totally OMG, the new guy is so hot." One of the voices said.
    "Like, witch one?" Another voice said.
    "The one whereing the green skirt thingy." The first voice replied.
    "It's a tunic, not a skirt!" I shouted. Then I realized they were talking about me.
    "Oh crap." I thought
    "So like, you wanna do something with him?" One of them asked.
    "Yea, like totally!" The other replied, "But like, lets do it tomorrow because it's like kinda late and stuff, and I'm like, tired and like, wanna go to bed.
    "Okay, let's like, do that" The other one said. Then I heard them walk away.
    "Hey guys, I think is kind late, It's about time we go to sleep" The Doctor said.
    "Yea Link, It's time to go to sleep." Jeff said in a really creepy voice.
    "There's no way I'm falling to sleep tonight!" I thought, "Not with a homicidal maniac constantly watching me, and a bunch of insane fangirls planning to do something to me tomorrow!" I scooted as far away from Jeff as possible, but he was still staring at me. So I turned around so I didn't have to look at him. But it didn't help much, I still knew he was there.
    I tried my best not to fall asleep that night, but I couldn't. When everybody else but Jeff were asleep for about an hour, I just couldn't stay awake anymore. So I feel asleep.

   

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This is chapter 3
Tell me what you think in the comments. :)
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:iconmoonshine112:
AHHHH THE DOCTORRRRR *fangirls* :iconmattsmithplz: WHAT ABOUT 10 THOUGHHHH, HE AND ELEVEN CAN BE IN IT, IT CAN BE A PARADOX asdfghjkl
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~nintendotransformer Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The doctor in the story is the 11th one.
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~insanelyADD Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So what's Erik from? At first I thought he was Masky, but now I think he's from a band I like. (I'm probably wrong though)
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~nintendotransformer Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
He's from Phantom of the Opera.
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~insanelyADD Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, Okay. XD I knew I was wrong.
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Yes!!! We got Jeff!!! Muwahahahaha >xD
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~nintendotransformer Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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:iconchaoticpuppetmaster:
Now...strip him, jk jk xD but there might be some fans out there that would do that if they didn't mine getting stab multiple times xD
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~shibitheshadowhound Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i like this story ^ᴥ^
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~nintendotransformer Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :iconjefflickplz:
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